tazzydjr Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 (edited) Dale Fan in Peace enjoy my review of the Ice Station Zebra Good Luck for the Rest of the Season UP THE DALE https://rochdaleawaydayreview.wordpress.com/2015/03/30/away-day-review-oldham-athletic-v-rochdale-ice-station-zebra/ Edited March 30, 2015 by Ackey Removed Title Gore and Bold Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
disjointed Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 Punctuation, punctuation, punctuation. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
opinions4u Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 Thanks for that. A few strategically placed full stops would enhance it. When typing the word "were" you should consider whether the word "was" would be a better use of grammar. Give Keith Hill my regards. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
piglinbland Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 "if id seen yer gettin off 409 tazzy id a breaked yer head!" Good write up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Blue Alb Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 that were a bit o fun were that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rudemedic Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 He did well to get the 409 at that time, unless he left early to catch it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
opinions4u Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 He did well to get the 409 at that time, unless he left early to catch it. Many did! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manshaw Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 Oh dear. Your grammar leaves a lot to be desired. That was hard reading. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Break The Silence Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 Oh dear. Your grammar leaves a lot to be desired. That was hard reading. Perhaps he's related to Barry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4froale Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 :censored: me was that written by Keith hill. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Break The Silence Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 (edited) In fairness, I actually quite enjoyed reading that. It was the away day experience of an ordinary bloke, written by an ordinary bloke, not a novelist. And he's got great taste in beer. I could quite happily bath in Guinness . Edited March 30, 2015 by Break The Silence Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archiecat Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 He were right about that pie, it looks shocking Thanks for posting Tazzy, hope the last few games go better for you than this one did Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Break The Silence Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 (edited) He were right about that pie, it looks shocking Thanks for posting Tazzy, hope the last few games go better for you than this one did And good luck with your play off bid. I'd much rather your lot finished 6th than Judas Iscariot and his sheep shagging lot from Baaaaaaaaaarnsley. Edited March 30, 2015 by Break The Silence Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leeslover Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 Reading it out loud in my head it sounds more like Burnley. But no matter, good luck, plucky little team of my home town. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceskylatic Posted March 30, 2015 Share Posted March 30, 2015 Then a minute later. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simoncorneyisgod Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 (edited) Jesus.......what are they teaching the kids in school these days!?? Edited March 31, 2015 by Simoncorneyisgod Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dannyboy55555 Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 This is a joke right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yarddogs Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 Painful ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rvlatic Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 Comedy Gold ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oafc_lover Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 Jesus. That is all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rosa Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 Jesus. That is all. A fine sentiment in Holy Week. He is all, and in all. God bless you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave_Og Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 has anyone donated...? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NewBlue Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 has anyone donated...? I'd donate a full stop. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rvlatic Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 And a truckload of commas... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ricardo Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 I think we need to donate for Marky D to go to night school, for some English lessons. Though to be fair you have noted that "not as good as past reviews but is short and sweet". I have to say though having read past reviews, it is as equally dire as the other reviews. I suppose at least it keeps you from being a nuisance on the streets. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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